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How much does my story suck so far? - running trails knife

I'm only 15, so that I know I'm not good at writing. Could you some advice about this?

It was an hour now, I think everyone has left ... I hope they have. It started two hours.

"Viv, wait!" If I fall on another wall, I swear to God I will kill you. Call Viviane happy, my best friend. We are fair, at that time in the labyrinth of the brothel.
I wanted to complain that it was dark, but suddenly there was a scream, and not someone screaming here is rare, bloody night, but it was a real shock. The call was screaming for more, followed by various people.
"Emma, why are you crying?" Viviane also wonder if I should be able to calm their fears.
"I do not know ... Let's Get outta here!" He shouted at her to cry.
Viviane took the torch, which had hidden for me, though I fear the darkness, and ran with me behind him.
I saw the knife before her.
He ran into a guand she looked quite normal. She stood before him and asked if she knew what was going on. He was then stabbed her in the stomach, and dropped the lantern. I did what any coward, I knew I turned the other way and ran.
Somehow I could not find the exit from the labyrinth, to see the dead bodies all over the gardens. I intend to call for help and rescue Viv simply impossible.

Please do not just say so.